breezepelt's first two daughters could have taken alder and needle's places in the story and bring twig and violet to windclan. This isn't entirely fleshed out because it is something I am still working on.Įasy: no thunderclan POV. Sorry this is a lot, it is something I have been working on for a while. In the end Hawkwing would kill Darktail instead of Onestar. Sk圜lan would still show up around book 3, which would cause even more chaos because the Kin would still control half of the lake territories. The Kin would be a threat for the best 4-5 books and the rest would be an epilogue of sorts which would deal with Sk圜lan settling by the lake and their conflict with ShadowClan over territory. The Darktail storyline would be better paced out to suit the arc, since it was the strongest point of AVOS. This would result in Rowanstar's exile and would be more justified than it was in the original books. They would show up towards the end of the book and offer to attack WindClan themselves to gain favor of the clan. Instead of WindClan giving the herbs to ShadowClan, it would actually be Darktail and his rogues who save them. Him separating the Sk圜lan kits would be more of an issue, and his inaction in TAS would lead to more ShadowClan deaths. Rowanstar would be a worse character than he was in AVOS, which would make ShadowClan turning to Darktail over him justified. Needletail wouldn't die halfway through the arc, and her character would be more consistent with how it was in TAQ. I think this could work because it would put Darktail around Bramblestar's age. It would be explained that Blackstar had a kit with a rogue when he was exiled with Brokenstar/Tigerstar in the original series. It just makes more sense to me because the Onestar twist kinda came out of left field. The twist with Darktail would be that he was Blackstar's son instead of Onestar. There would also be a wedge between Alderheart and Sparkpelt, probably concerning Sk圜lan. The arc would focus on Alderheart and Needletail trying to keep Twig and Violet safe during the events of AVOS, because they get caught in the middle of the conflict with ShadowClan/WindClan, Darktail, and Sk圜lan trying to settle by the lake. Twigbranch and Violetshine would still be very important characters but just not main POVs. The protagonists of the arc would be Alderheart, Sparkpelt, and Needletail. IDK about all of the details, but here are some of the things I would change. It had a very strong first half, and TAQ is in my top 10 favorite books in the series. This is something I have been thinking a lot about recently because I really like what AVOS tried to do.
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